In order to win, I have to have more than 15 comments and 30 ratings (you actually have to give it a thumbs up, not just give it a star rating).
So, if you have a spare moment, I'd love for you to read it and let me know what you think. It's actually an adult short story (gasp!) and it's only 500 words, so it won't take long to read through it!
Thanks in advance guys! Here's the link. :)
6 brilliant remarks:
I'm so glad you provided a link because I loved this piece. Your short story was amazing and I'm so glad I stopped by to comment!!!
PS I wanted to remind you that this Thursday and Friday is the Guess that character blogfest! Can't wait to see what your character looks like!
I read it, I rated it, I loved it! Congratulations on entering a contest. That takes nerve. :) Let us know what happens! And please keep writing this story, it's a great beginning.
I came by for your Blogfest entry, but was happy to enjoy your short story contest entry. Sorry it's been so long since I came by!
You can check out my blogfest entry here.
Michele
Blogfest entry today on SouthernCityMysteries
I'll check it out
I really enjoyed your story! Great job. I can't wait to read your Character entry, too! :)
Dude, where's your character blogfest entry. You're on the linky list! That means you're committed.
How did you do in the competition? I liked the story. You did a nice job of evoking the senses with some of the details. I also liked the element of suspense building throughout.
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